COMING CLOSE TO THE END OF WORDS
We are using the translation of Beowulf created by Seamus Heaney. To his credit, he took responsibility for this poem, and turned it into something that regular people would want to read and enjoy. Who knew that a translation of a poem more than a thousand years old, about people killing dragons, could reach the top of the Times best-seller list? In the words of Andrew Motion, in the Financial Times, Heaney “made a masterpiece out of a masterpiece.” I have no doubt that Heaney grieved over some of the choices he had to make, but by his rules he had to act as an artist, create a new poem. This is the sacrifice always made in a “free” translation. To help those who could read Old English, he reproduced the original on facing pages.
One day, fifty years after Beowulf's battle with Grendel's mother, a slave steals a golden cup from the lair of a dragon When the dragon sees that the cup has been stolen, it leaves its cave in a rage, burning everything in sight. Beowulf and his warriors come to fight the dragon, but Beowulf tells his men that he will fight the dragon alone and that they should wait on the barrow. Beowulf descends to do battle with the dragon but finds himself outmatched. His men, upon seeing this and fearing for their lives, retreat into the woods. One of his men, Wiglaf, however, in great distress at Beowulf's plight, comes to his aid. The two slay the dragon, but Beowulf is mortally wounded. After Beowulf dies, Wiglaf remains by his side, grief-stricken. When the rest of the men finally return, Wiglaf bitterly admonishes them, blaming their cowardice for Beowulf's death.
And now . . . The Beginning of the End of Our Story . . .
. . . Next thing, they say, the noble son of Weohstan
Saw the king in danger at his side
And displayed his inborn bravery and strength.
He left the head alone, but his fighting hand
Was burned when he came to his kinsman’s aid.
He lunged at the enemy lower down
So that his decorated sword sank into its belly 2700
And the flames grew weaker.
Once again the king
Gathered his strength and drew a stabbing knife
He carried on his belt, sharpened for battle.
He stuck it deep into the dragon’s flank.
Beowulf dealt it a deadly wound.
They had killed the enemy, courage quelled his life;
That pair of kinsmen, partners in nobility,
Had destroyed the foe.
So, every man should act,
Be at hand when needed; but now, for the king,
This would be the last of his many labors 2710
And triumphs in the world.
Then the wound Dealt by the ground-burner earlier began
To scald and swell; Beowulf discovered
Deadly poison suppurating inside him, Surges of nausea, and so, in his wisdom,
The prince realized his state and struggled
Towards a seat on the rampart.
He steadied his gazed
On those gigantic stones, saw how the earthwork
Was braced with arches built over columns.
And now that thane unequalled for goodness 2720
With his own hands washed his lord’s wounds,
Swabbed the weary prince with water,
Bathed him clean, unbuckled his helmet.
Beowulf spoke in spite of his wounds,
Mortal wounds, he still spoke
For he well knew his days in the world
Had been lived out to the end: his allotted time
Was drawing to a close, death was very near.
“Now is the time when I would have wanted
To bestow this armor on my own son, 2730
Had it been my fortune to have fathered an heir
And live on in his flesh.
For fifty years
I ruled this nation.
No king
Of any neighboring clan would dare
Face me with troops, none had the power
“To intimidate me. I took what came,
Cared for and stood by things in my keeping,
Never fomented quarrels, never
Swore to a lie. All this consoles me,
Doomed as I am and sickening for death; 2740
Because of my right way, the Ruler of Mankind
Need never blame me when the breath leaves my body
For murder of kinsmen.
Go now quickly,
Dearest Wiglaf, under the gray stone
Where the dragon is laid out, lost to his treasure;
Hurry to feast your eyes on the hoard.
Away you go: I want to examine
That ancient gold, gaze my fill
On those garnered jewels; my going will be easier
For having seen the treasure, a less troubled letting-go 2750
Of the life and lordship I have long maintained.”
And so, I have heard, the son of Weohstan
Quickly obeyed the command of his languishing
War-weary lord; he went in his chain-mail
Under the rock-piled roof of the barrow,
Exulting in his triumph, and saw beyond the seat
A treasure-trove of astonishing richness,
Wall-hangings that were a wonder to behold,
Glittering gold spread across the ground,
The old dawn-scorching serpent’s den 2760
Packed with goblets and vessels of the past,
Tarnished and corroding.
Rusty helmets all eaten away.
Armbands everywhere, Artfully wrought.
How easily treasure Buried in the ground, gold hidden
However skillfully, can escape from any man!
And he saw too a standard, entirely of gold,
Hanging high over the hoard,
A masterpiece of filigree; it glowed with light
So he could make out the ground at his feet 2770
And inspect the valuables.
Of the dragon there was no
Remaining sign: the sword had dispatched him.
Then, the story goes, a certain man
Plundered the hoard in the immemorial howe,
Filled his arms with flagons and plates,
Anything he wanted; and took the standard also,
Most brilliant of banners.
Already the blade
Of the old king’s sharp killing-sword
Had done its worst: the one who had for long
Minded the hoard, hovering over gold, 2780
Unleashing fire, surging forth
Midnight after midnight, had been mown down.
Wiglaf went quickly, keen to get back,
Excited by the treasure.
Anxiety weighed
On his brave heart--he was hoping he would find
The leader of the Geats alive where he had left him
Helpless, earlier, on the open ground.
So, he came to the place, carrying the treasure,
And found his lord bleeding profusely,
His life at an end: again, he began to swab his body 2790
The beginnings of an utterance
Broke out from the king’s breast-cage.
The old lord gazed sadly at the gold.
“To the everlasting Lord of All,
To the King of Glory, I give thanks
That I beheld this treasure here in front of me,
That I have been allowed to leave my people
So well-endowed on the day I die.
Now that I have bartered my last breath
To own this fortune, it is up to you 2800
To look after their needs.
I can hold out no longer.
Order my troop to construct a barrow
On a headland on the coast, after my pyre has cooled.
It will loom in the horizon at Hronesness
And be a reminder among my people-- So that in coming times crews under sail
Will call it Beowulf’s barrow, as they steer
Through the life they had been lent.
Background
Here we find Beowulf suddenly fifty years a good king. This is quite a time warp from the immediately preceding arrival back home, a hero for wiping out the Grendel family. This time-muddled aspect of Beowulf rankles critics seeking a tidier poem. Things commentators are, to say the least, uncomfortable with frequent switching of time planes: the time-very-past, in which a noble tribe created the treasure that becomes the dragon’s hoard; the times-less-past (there are several), in which we are told of the greatness and the downfall of legendary kings and heroes; the time-present, in which Beowulf kills the monsters; the time-future, when other peoples, hearing of Beowulf’s death, will make bold to move against the Geats, and will conquer them, pressing them into slavery. Geatish maidens scream as they imagine it. They know that it will come to pass. Perhaps, for the folks in Beowulf, there is no segmentation of time: stories of the past live on, the present speaks for itself, and the future will mirror much of what is presently happening. Imagine Beowulf and his retainers checking their watches to be sure not to miss the quaffing of the mead – or maybe that, too, was a timeless occupation.
Exploration 1: To whom does Beowulf speak? As he dies, what is important for him to say?
“Beowulf spoke: in spite of his wounds,
Mortal wounds, he still spoke
………………………………………………………
Was drawing to a close, death was very near.”
Exploration 2: “. . . Starting at about line 2730, Beowulf says his final words. He wishes he had a son. He reviews his years as king and is satisfied with his record. Then he asks Wiglaf to bring him the treasure.
Of all that Beowulf has done, why is it important to him to see the Dragon’s treasure above all else, including his kinsmen?
Exploration 3: The old Lord gazed sadly at the gold/ I can’t get no satisfaction
Observations?
ReplyDelete1. I ken Beowulf is speaking to Wiglaf son of Weostan. And to many millions of high school and college students.
2. Wealth was power. Beowulf was happy to leave a pile behind for his people, even if everything would soon be stolen by someone stronger.
3. He was like Moses who was refused entrance to the promised land. He would have to settle for the unknown. Might be Heaven. Might not be Heaven.