This twice-published poem is on
the lighter side, in contrast to the first three verse offerings in Monday’s past
posts. “About time,” you might say. Or better, spoken with military authority, “Make
it so,” as Star Trek’s Captain Jean Luke Picard often commands. Below, you will
find that lighter experience focused on a big black bird up here in Northwest
Minnesota: The Raven, or Corvus Corax, if you prefer the taxonomic name. Raven’s presence is
year-round, and provides us with a pretty constant source of awe and amusement.
Raven is the premiere trickster of the bird world akin to
Coyote of myth, legend, and verity. The bird is a feathered beauty famous for
thrilling aerobatics and amazing tricks. In the wild, ravens have pushed rocks on people to keep them from
climbing to their nests, and they steal fish by pulling fishermen’s lines out
of ice holes.
Relevant to this poem, the bird has a distinctive voice of at
least 79 call types including a deep croaking. In captivity, parrots
have an inferior vocabulary compared to Ravens
who can learn to talk and mimic other noises, like car engines, toilets
flushing, and animal and bird calls.
Some idiots use the Raven for
target practice; fortunately, Raven is too wily (there’s the Coyote again, as
in Wily Coyote), and too aeronautically gifted for all but the most superior
shots. Ravens don’t seem to take life very seriously, and they fear nothing but
oncoming trucks. Even here, they have an uncanny ability to escape vehicles at
the last moment. Doing their civic duty, Ravens are among the superlative roadkill
clean-up teams. Surely, you’ve seen them in the middle or on the side of
country roads, chowing down on a grisly carcass.
These ebony-feathered creatures
have a varied diet made up primarily of meat including rodents plus other
birds’ eggs and nestlings. (There’s that tricky, self-serving Coyote
resemblance again.) Ravens are highly intelligent to the point where they work
together hunting and driving prey into the open. This magnificent corvid is
highly adaptable and can live comfortably in a wide range of environments. This
bird’s range is nothing short of spectacular covering most of Europe and Asia,
the American west coast and northern borders, and Canada.
Now that you know a bit more
about the character you are about to poetically meet, strap on your metaphorical
parachute and get ready for the Raven ride.
Raven
Laughing
Gloss-black wings scissor-slice shrill air – winter sun
shimmers, purpling feathers
Wing on wing, a suchness leaving tiny vapor trail of Raven
breathing
In one long glide he skims forest, river, fields
that take me stumbling hours to
cross, but he just cocks his black-maned head
looks at me – a puffed
pink lump, squinting up
at Raven laughing
Contrail crystals stream off his wingtips, hooked
black-bladed beak
slits and severs space up there, while I stand aground
listening
for what I’m sure I hear in just one black
cackle – a Raven laugh
but the aerobatics do not stop and he’s too busy being one
to notice me or hoot – just squawks at his own dark
brilliance and at my lurching run
So easy he fits his Raven skin, no worry etches his black eye
Effortless he shapes his Raven wings against evermore sky
And I And I And I
gulp, tear up, and wish my breath would sit
sheathed in bone and flesh so well
as this glossy-feathered one gliding traceless
winds
while all I can do is cry out to laughing Raven, leaving,
with no sound
The
Raven Adventure: As has become our habit, below you will find even
more information about the Raven that may provide a deeper appreciation of the
bird. If you are so inclined, the information may also help you “analyze” the
poem, after which you will find the usual Explorations to assist you in
engaging the poem and in encountering Raven.
Backgound:
The history of this poem is quite simple: I
love watching Ravens and all their hijinks. Besides that, they are beautiful
and highly intelligent. And they have a sense of humor, and have been known to
sit on top of telephone poles and one Raven at a time drops clumps of snow on
passersby. Ravens have been known to imitate wolves or foxes to attract
them to carcasses that the Raven isn't capable of breaking open.
These big birds are lifelong
monogamists, pairs staying together year-round, even roosting near each other
every night. Pairs use the same nest site for several years, if possible.
Through her twenty days or so of incubating on average 5-6 eggs, the male makes
sure his beloved has nourishment by bringing her food to the nest. After the
offspring hatch, both parents take part in satisfying the young ones diet and
instruction in life-as-Raven.
Ravens are not crows as these
grand creatures weigh on average four times as much as their smaller cousins.
If using size to identify the Raven is difficult, try to sight the much heavier
bill and a significant frill of feathers at the throat. With its size
differential, the Raven’s silhouette can look much like a raptor. It is
possible that in his bird-brained identity delusion, Raven believes he is a raptor,
based on his brash behavior. In addition, unlike crows, who flap and fly pretty
much in a straight line, Ravens, with their four-to-five-foot wingspan, are
more likely to soar and glide on their long foraging trips. Crows gather in
large flocks; Ravens hang out with a single buddy, lifelong mate, or a small
family group. The exception to this is the winter congregations, or any time of
year when one or more of them spots a dumpster or other food treasure trove.
Old
Norse mythology tells us that two Ravens, Huginn (thought) and Muninn (memory)
sit on Odin’s shoulders. Odin gave the birds the power of speech, and every
morning they would fly about the world, and come back to Odin to inform him of
what was going on. (Odin is also said to have had two wolves (Geri and Freki),
but that’s another story.) Interestingly, Ravens, as opportunistic scavengers,
truly do associate with large carnivores, especially wolves, in hopes that they
will crack open carcasses that the Raven cannot manage. They also like hanging
out close to humans because we are wasteful, and we provide large amounts of
garbage.
In the mythology and clans of many Native
American tribes, Raven is honored as a hero of various cultures. This quixotic
figure is seen both as an esteemed and benevolent helper, assisting people and
the environment around them, and as noted earlier, similar to Coyote, Raven is
viewed as a trickster who can be extremely frivolous to the point of acting
like a clown, causing himself trouble as well as those associated with him. In
short, Raven is seen both as a hero who does magnificent deeds, and as a fool.
Note: If you are interested in
memorializing Raven in the form of a tattoo, you might start here:
Please
enjoy the following explorations, or just laugh or cackle, as suits your mood.
Exploration 1: Why is
this Raven laughing?
Exploration
2: How
is the human on the ground feeling?
Exploration
3: In the second to last stanza, what does the
following line suggest: “. . . he’s too busy being one . . .”? Who is the “one”
referred to?
Exploration
4: “Wing-on-wing”
is a sailing term. How does it translate to Raven’s flight?
Exploration
5: Why
is the person on the ground tearing up toward the end of the poem?
Exploration
6: In
the poem’s last line, who is leaving?
Keep an eye out for Raven
evermore!
Jack Pine Savage
Another fine poem with much to peck peck at, like a careless camper's pack full of trail mix.
ReplyDeleteDo you feel your frailty as you follow this ideal raven? You are better looking than "a puffed pink lump." The raven is almost a machine, a sailboat or a jet, exalting in himself.
Would you trade places? I would...for a day. I would not want to spend the night in a tree when the owl is on the hunt.
The raven laughs in every verse, but disappears without a sound. Where does he go? Into your poem.
The tattoos were interesting. I want one that says to the denizens of rough neighborhoods, "He's not worth it."
Dear Raven Fan,
DeleteThe Raven would love your simile of the pack and trail mix. Ha!
You’ve nailed it once again: the “puffed pink lump” is indeed about the human observer’s feeling of inferiority; not giving herself credit for skills other than Raven’s capacities. And thank you for compliment about being “better looking” than the “lump.” The external description speaks more to the internal landscape than the external, i.e., the “lump” description speaks to the woman’s sense of freedom never gained and the impossibility of gaining it now. (A serious subject, perhaps for discussion some time. Maybe.)
Oh yes: “this ideal Raven.” Good catch: “ideal.” The woman no doubt reaches too high for impossible goals symbolized by her desire to fly, and her sadness at knowing she will never attain to the heights.
Trading places? Only in the sense of escaping the discontented status of being human with a brain big enough to be quite bothersome.
Consider the last line again, please: “all I can do is cry out to laughing Raven, leaving, with no sound.” Who is the one leaving? In every other mention of the laughing Raven, he is making a sound; however, in the final line, the laugh is with no sound. Why would Raven suddenly make “no sound?”
Can’t wait to see your tattoo; however, you will have to move to a rough neighborhood first.
Laughing Poet (hint, hint)
CS