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11 June 2018 Red Dog

Nope. A crimson canine does not feature in this week’s poem – perhaps a like-kind spirit, but definitely not one that drools or barks. The featured critter dwells in the Beltrami Forest (and elsewhere), punches out great impact in proportion to its size, and in several ways resembles a fighter jet. Got it yet? No worries, if not. Read on – just for the fun of it. Oh, and apologizes for any perceived anthropomorphizing; I happen to believe that non-human creatures share the value that humans do.

RED DOG
(Or The Hummer at My Window)
Each evening at dusk, a ruby-throated humming bird flitters outside my bedroom window
His shining scarlet neck and breast signify his male gender and his attitude about himself
With assurance, he perches on the peak of a charred and pointy stump and surveys his piney realm
            for he is both lord and protector of the red-trimmed feeder filled with sugar water

This tiny royal, ungenerous as any potentate, guards his treasured, liquid cache
With long-beaked sword and dogfight sorties against would-be usurpers
who scatter before his wrath as he spirals between stump and sup
wings whirring, blurring, voice buzzing with menace
Even the tiny feathers of ocean green patina sheathe him like a regal robe
His emerald shoulders fluff and shrug followed by a shiver down his delicate spine
            Ending at the tail, spread and quivering

Two reckless females bare of scarlet plumage arrive to drink the sparkling brew
but before their beaks can dip, the master flyer zooms straight up, scatters them
without a drop of succulence gracing their rapier-thin beaks
The girls return over and over bidding to imbibe the nectar undulating in the breeze
and at each approach Red Baron-like the ruby-breasted ace pilot maneuvers
scolding the intruders, but either hunger or stupidity bring them back time after time
never failing to behold their missions thwarted, their bellies against their spines

As I write, Red Dog settles, stilling on his pointy perch, perhaps exhausted 
from his mighty forays against mere females’ incursions – he wishes for a worthier foe
I call him Red Dog for his canine persistence hour after hour as sunlight wanes
and twilight pulls a blanket over Forest hips and breast

Ah! They return and from the fire-blackened stump Red Dog lunges straight up from below 
like a Harrier built for vertical flight and skirmish
In moments the two ladies take their leave once again and the ruler returns to his turret
Red Dog remains at his post, ever watchful, foregoing food and flight in favor of vigilance
            An F-15 ready to launch from the flight deck, and when the two return he jets off ferocious
            tattering their unvetted strategy again from below – a failsafe tactic against all foes

Once more lights atop the pinnacle, a hangered Tomahawk awaiting the clash of combat
or in this own bird-brained way remembering the day coming now in this ruddy spring
where guarding eggs and miniscule hummers transform his warrior ways
Then ceases the battle clacks and chatter
as the females play their part in life and death, the greatest matters


Background:
Today’s poem arises from deep within Beltrami Island State Forest, where my husband, Joe and I, and our faithful German Shepherd, Willa, live in the privilege of nature as few people on the planet have. Not much to say really, except I’ve attempted to share just one of the many companion creatures that share our space. Naturally, we offer the sweet enticement of several feeders around the cabin, hoping to stave off tiny fights by proffering enough for all; however, that doesn’t seem to matter. Like us, these diminutive feathered friends appear to suffer from the same perspective shared by many humans: I can never have enough, and the pie can’t feed us all.

Note on the last two lines of the poem:
Female hummingbirds do all the nest building, incubating, and caring for the tiny hatchlings. A male has only one contribution to the next generation as he mates with any females that he can attract to his territory. These are not birds of the Romeo and Juliet persuasion.

A piece of trivia: Hummingbirds beat their wings at the rate of 80 times per second.

Explorations:
Exploration #1: Can we learn anything from Red Dog?
Exploration #2: A definite contrast is portrayed between the genders. Does this strike you as misogynistic? 
Exploration #3: If you could have a conversation with Red Dog, what subjects would you prefer to discuss?
Exploration #4: One word within the poem references (sort of) something Joe McDonnell would appreciate. Can you find that word?

Jack Pine Savage

Comments

  1. #4 "...something Joe McDonnell would appreciate." Did you put that in there so I'd "explore" your poem a dozen times? I can relate to: "...evening pulls a blanket over Forest hips and breast." But that's a line. You said a "word". How about "Hummer"? I'm thinking of the army jeep. Perhaps you see me as a warrior.
    This is a good subject for you since you love flight. It's full of jet, rocket and aeroplane imagery.
    I learned that hummingbirds must consume half their weight in sugar every day. I know it's just instinct that makes the male guard his stash. Maybe he's bored since his only job is to mate, which the girls only allow at set times, which is instinctual on their part. He's bored and he's frustrated which turns him into a selfish pig. A pig with wings.
    If I could sit down with Red Dog over a cup of sugar, I'd ask him about his 500 mile flight over the Gulf of Mexico twice a year. Amazing. No wonder he leaves in July.
    Your portrayal of the contrast between the genders is not misogynistic. Red Dog comes off looking like the jerk. There's a word for that.

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  2. Biblical hint: Proverbs 23: Be not among winebibbers.

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    1. For the drunkard and the glutton shall come to poverty: and drowsiness shall clothe a man with rags.

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  3. Woe's hint is off the mark. He means well. So Chairman, have you discovered the "word" yet? Will see you this evening, and reveal the answer to the mystery, if you haven't unraveled it.

    Even though "hummer" isn't the mystery word, seeing you as a warrior isn't a far leap. I can see you leading the charge down or over the hill in some mystical Celtic battle, now deep inside lineage stories that emerge when the moon is blood red. You carry a hand-and-a-half bastard sword, but being who you are, you wield it with one hand.

    Yes, I very much like themes and images that have to do with flight. It is, perhaps, the most amazing human accomplishments, just behind staying married for life.

    Your phrase, "a pig with wings," echoes "if pigs could fly" - John Lawson: "If pigs could fly they'd fly away and never grace the earth again" I'm thinking Red Dog is too self absorbed to even notice his piglette-ness, if he even has that characteristic. Which leads us to the part about "misogyny." We are reading a book, "Down Girl," which treats misogyny in the usual manner, with the exception of infrequent references to women's capability of practicing misogyny towards men, towards other women, and men toward other men. It is a fascinating treatment. So, the "word for that" is the same: misogyny, or if you prefer the vernacular, a-hole.

    Thanks again for your kind attention to my small efforts - about the size of Red Dog.
    Cheers - JP Savage

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