Originally published July 6, 2020...
Remembering the cliffhanger in the previous segment, we were left with the arrival of a female entity appearing from within the cave. The first several lines of the poem below mark the place we left off last time. As Dragons True continue to reveal themselves, the main character and trusty Argose become accustomed to the fantastical occurrences and creatures. In this segment, we travel farther in to the next supernatural (or is it natural, if we can see it so) adventure. But wait. More than adventure lies here, for the next candidate for “the one” is about to appear. Wait again. Make that two candidates; however, you’ll have to wait until next week’s post to begin to know the second. Hint: Beyond here, dragons be. Dragons true, that is.

… A wind rushes against the cave’s moist walls
spinning the haze into circles and swirls
I peer inside, then squinting hard, I see
a hundred bats hanging from the ceiling
black wings folded against furred bodies
and on the floor everywhere their droppings
The bat clusters vibrate but stay composed
“Who’s there? Who’s there?” Echoes from the dusky gorge
and with those words, she emerges misty-clad
as if gossamer veils grow from her body
She does not step into the rising light
where we’ve been standing, and now move toward her
“Attend! Why for do you enter my place?”
Her speech, old form, wafts easy on my ears
So much I want to hear more, so stay dumb
“I pr’thee, master of the fur-clothed one,
say whence you came and what your purpose be.”
She takes two steps toward us – strides with meaning
Light reveals raven hair streaked rusty red
Her eyes glisten brown, center-pierced pearl white
I take her measure instantly complete
now a moment flies and we’re face to face
With no memory of motion, we stand near
Her breathing smells faintly of earth and rock
Argose stands perpendicular to us
His gaze darts between us asking, “And now?”
“And now,” indeed! This unintended chance
EE! AE-EE! EE-AE-EE!! EE-AE! EE-EE!
sharp, metallic screech n’caw – tiny nails
driven one-by-one into my steel skull
I take two steps back – almost lose balance
Argose skitters behind, toenails scraping
rock underfoot as he lets out whimpers
“May’hap ‘twill get thee to attend to me?!
“Very like! Sorry I so truly am.”
I note I am taking on the lilt
and the cadence of her speech expressions
“Say whence you came and what your purpose be.”
She repeats her query like a command
Shuffling my feet, scratching my ear, I say,
“I come from a northbound land far from here
To purpose, it may be said I have none
except to search and find the one
who may ‘hap has answers to questions I have
that I cannot tell if foolish or brave”
“Quests be such as these things thou seekest out.
Yet why cometh here to this very place?
where I have lived longer than memory serves?”
I mumble words I barely hear myself
Argose at my side gently licks my hand
“I cannot say why I am come to this place
and not some other more surpassing gate
She pauses, pondering it seems, as I
speculate the manner of her strangeness . . .
Background
I’m not sure why, but I’ve always had a penchant for wispy, flowing figures coming out of the dark. Maybe this represents my alter-ego. Maybe some subconscious emergence into consciousness. Or perhaps a wild imagination accounts for this? Who knows? Speaking of imagination, those who have one often find themselves in thoughts of fantasy and magic. When I was young, I loved the depiction of both, and tried the many “don’t try this at home” fêtes of hand and head. None worked magic in my being; however, I never gave up hope that something “above this world,” extraordinary, and thrilling might just happen if I waited, hoped, and practiced long enough.
Exploration 1: When this segment begins, do you remember what or who you guessed might be emerging from the cave? Once you found out, were you surprised, pleased, disappointed, or some other reaction?
Exploration 2: Who or what do you speculate the one with raven-hair with rusty red streaks may be?
Exploration 3: What do you think of the dialect in this segment?
1 I had no image in mind so was able to take your figure in stride.
ReplyDelete2 A dragon, no?
3 it sounds like a 19th century poet writing a tale of long ago.